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Dead within living Corruption by ~ShadowFox97:iconShadowFox97:



Take no love take only power

The emotions you own waste the hour

Take no joy take only riches

The dreams you had are empty wishes

Leave your family and disowned friends

They create morals that you must bend

But in greed, power, and wealth

Your soul will leave and take your health

Sell it away, sell it away, the true gold of honor

When all is lost, this is your horror

Diseased corruption in your riches

Your blackened heart, as dark as your wishes.

Dead within living corruption.
©2008-2009 ~ShadowFox97
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Author's Comments

I was thinking of something to write today, and i gave the first two lines to mom to see what she thought.

She didn't like anything that related to fighting or violence when i put "battlecry" into words. so after a long debate and some thinking, I spawned this.

I feel like combat is alive but when i write stuff like this, all else is dead.

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:iconcabooserif:
I'm speachless. Seriously. It's awsome.

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It's impossible to waste ammo, it can only be expended at a highly inconvenient rate.
:iconmaddhatteraceink:
kickass sickness fer sure :]
:iconshadowfox97:
thanks.

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[link]
"I just feel that every day is the worst day of my life..."
"Is today the worst day of your life?"
"Yeah..."
"Wow, that sucks"
:iconreptilia-7:
sweet. I like how this one turned out
:iconshadowfox97:
Thanks... But it still went against my usual train of poetics.

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[link]
"I just feel that every day is the worst day of my life..."
"Is today the worst day of your life?"
"Yeah..."
"Wow, that sucks"

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